Script

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Script

Boy: "so hows school going"

Girl: "its good.."

Boy: "classes?"

Girl: "good..."

Boy: "boys?"

Girl: "You know im not going to tell my big brother about boys"

Boy: " "Aww come on i want you to be able to tell me anything, you're my little sister"

Girl: "wait what's that"

*points down at the ground toward missing poster on the rocks*

*picks up missing sign off the ground*

Boy: "oh yeah, i wasn't going to tell you because of school and everything, but hey dont worry about that, they will be fine, but hey I'm going to run to the bathroom real fast, stay right here. Dont move!"

*girl looking out at the ocean waiting*

cop: "you said you left her right here?"

Boy: "yeah she was just right there, I went to the...."

*Rubs his face cuz he's freaking out*

Boy: I left her right there, she was just right there. I went to the bathroom and when I came back she was gone.

Cop: okay well here is my card, if you see or hear anything give me a call.

*shakes hands with the cop*

Boy: thank you so much

Cop: alright take it easy

*fanning the card on his hand*

Boy: I don't know where you are, but I swear I will find you.

THE END

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