Rough Draft script

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Script::
*suspenseful music*
(Shows bulletin board with missing people (insert shot)
(Walking up showing all the clothes on the beach and in water.)
(Show foot prints in sand.)


*Go from feet up to the people’s face as they walk on beach*

Boy: Wow I can’t believe all these people are still missing.

Girl: It’s weird because they have no lead on what is actually happening to them.

Boy: Do you ever think why they went missing?

Girl: I never really try and think about it because there are so many of them going missing that it worries me…

Boy: Hopefully they are found and everyone can relax on the situation.

Girl: I’m hungry… Want to go grab me an ice cream?

Boy: Yeah sure do you want to come with?

Girl: No, I’ll just wait here.

*Boy leaves*

Voice Over: Walk into the water… You know you want to go away… Just keep walking… 
Don’t look back…

*Girl walks into the water and disappears*

*Boy reenters with ice cream*

Boy: Rachel? Rachel? Where did you go?

*Looks down at floor and sees her phone*

*Slow-mo drops ice cream*


Boy: What am I going to do?

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